Week 5 Self-Critique

The final image to critique is from the light painting assignment. I loved playing with light and hope to do more of these kind of pictures in the future.

Contrasting Forces

I wished I could've experimented more when doing the light painting, but plan to find more time to play around later. We just finished remodeling our basement, so a lot of our stuff is in storage. With my limited, resources, space, and time, I'm surprised I got as many awesome photos as I did. XD Final critique, I choose you! Go!

Description: Two light sources wildly curving around the image.
Analysis: Clear line are formed from these two bright colors. While these colors usually contrast distastefully, in this shot, then blend together as if one source that changes colors as it moves across the image. This creates unity and movement. This piece isn't as balanced as it could be. There is a black area to the left that should be cropped away to help focus the eye on the light.
Interpretation: Many things of the world rub against each the wrong way, such as bright purple and green. But this image illustrates how anything, and everything can create something amazing if they work together in the right way.
Evaluation: The image is clear and is a quality example of light painting.